"Your precious Blue Oath cost me my father and my home. And now you say it has cost me my husband as well! Clear your eyes, Alisdair. THIS is the true meaning of war. You men make pledges and we women dig your graves.
"As a writer you try to listen to what others aren't saying.and write about the silence." There is very little silence in this show, so what does that say about the writing? I like the feel that I get from the type face of this quote.
As a writer, your job is to torture your readers with tension. The fun of fiction is anticipation, and if your story doesn't have it your readers won't stick around. Here are 3 ways you might be killing your story's tension and losing readers.